IELTS写作: 第二段主体段


雅思大作文主体段Main body:

Some people might argue that(1) the gap year would discourage students’ ambition on their study. After exposing(2) themselves into society or nature, senior high school graduates feel themselves no longer disciplined in their study and do not return to college. However, given a year off(3), youngsters have the opportunity, time as well as the very ability to make future blueprints. Thus, whatever they decide is, to a large extent(4), reasonable and countable(4).

段内驳论,表明“人们认为gap year会导致辍学”的缺点,其实也是经过学生再有时间、机会和能力的基础上作出的理性思考。







For those who(1) would recontinue their academic life, taking a year off traveling(2) produce many positive outcomes on their school life. Students usually spend 12 years on exhaustive courses and examinations before they are admitted to their dream colleges and universities. Taking a year break(3) to travel would afford them the opportunity to approach the next phase of their education with a fresh start and renewed vigor while starving off academic burnout(4).


(1)表示类指的定语从句(也可以用单数形式he who…)



In terms of people’s future plan, a gap year is also beneficial to students. It could be a pilot runfor your career.This kind of experience would be a valuable notch to students’ CV, which might be an entry ticket when they entering the work force after earning academic degree. Besides boosting their resume, a gap year would absorb the shock of leaving the academic environment. The concern of gearing themselves to the working environment was experienced before they went to colleges or universities.


本段苗老师特地简化了语法,多用了小词,旨在告诉考生,考试的时候切忌用大词显示自己的词汇量。目前就连国外作家都风行“PLAIN ENGLISH”的运动,即“用简单的词表达最确切生动的意思”。平时考生可以想一想已知词汇如何用对用活,这比填鸭式背新词重要并且提分快。