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IELTS写作  混合类图表 体育运动开支

 

雅思a类小作文话题,关于混合图题型:

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.Write at least 150 Words.

翻译:英国父母每月花在孩子体育运动上的开销以及在足球,田径和游泳三项上的参与人数。请写一篇150字以上的报告。

9分范文赏析

The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.

It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.

In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £30.

Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.(185 words, band 9)

写作思路精讲

For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:

  1. Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣
  2. Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要
  3. First ‘details’ paragraph: 3 sentences
  4. Second ‘details’ paragraph: 3 sentences。

三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。

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